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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Mar 11, 2008 17:48:06 GMT -5
Ok in my class called Communication Arts (Reading Writing etc, Its mixed together) we had to make poems and I'm posting one on the warriors site....DO NOT TAKE THIS POEM!
Spaghetti
Meatballs, Sauce
Now on my shirt
Messy, messy! Oh my!
Napkins
Yes that was a Cinquain. I did not steal this, I made it up...I liked it so I decided to post it on here. Anybody else can post their poem(s) also if they like. Happy Writing!
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Post by Shadowstar on Mar 11, 2008 21:02:15 GMT -5
Last year I wrote this awsome Diamonte. I'll try my best to remember it: Day
Bright, Morning,
Shining, Sparkling, Beaming,
Running, Soaring, Sleeping, Stopping,
Sinking, Blackening, Glittering,
Dark, Evening,
Night It was a lot different than that, I couldn't remeber most of the words, so I had to improvise. But watev, it's got the same concept. |
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Mar 17, 2008 10:01:57 GMT -5
Oh! I like yours! I made some better ones then the when I made...but I dont feel like posting them. I even made one about Trever.....  Here I'll type that! If theres a reason:If theres a reason, why do you stare? If theres a reason, why do you care? If theres a reason, why do you speak to me? You're always there, always talking, looking. Why not tell me? How you feel, it only takes a few words. Because maybe, I feel the same way. I stare, I care and I even speak to you. Are you scared, am I? Love is always true. Three simple words I Love You? Mainly its bout me liking Trevor and if he likes me back. (Which I kinda think he does) Anyway notice the question mark at the end on I love you? That makes the poem fall into place and its the only thing that rymes....>.< (lol) Here I'll type one more. Look Around:I look at everyone around me, wondering what they think. Of me? Of themselves? About where they live? Anything! Everyone likes to keep to themselves, or at least some people do. No one seems to listen to the ones who are hurting, who are alone, or just need a friend. People look right past them like a bunch of ants. Then they stomp on them like a peice of nothing. Just look around! Notice things! Then maybe you could make a difference, in society, in citezenship, or just for the sake of making another person feel better. Take my hand. Never let go. And everything bad will be all over. You're all watched over, never looked away from. That last one is kinda cristiany so Dark please dont comment on it if you understand it and your comment is rude. Thanks I know how you dont believe in that stuff but I do so please keep to yourself on that one. Thanks really appreciated! |
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Post by Bloodbone on Mar 28, 2008 18:49:13 GMT -5
This my new favorite poem of mine....
I open up for you,
I gave you my life.
You crushed it in one quick swipe,
I immediately faded.
You stole everything from me,
Nothing left but.....
You’re here,
Trembling with fear and death.
I am not afraid,
I had a chance to live.
But, I gave it up for you.
I survived your wrath
I have nothing left,
I am just a piece of leftover…
I am Dreaming once again
You pull me deeper,
Everywhere I run,
Everywhere I hide,
I come back to you.
No matter what it is I will always be confused and abandoned
I am racing,
And chasing after your soul.
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Mar 29, 2008 9:02:26 GMT -5
*cries* TREVOR ASKED OUT VICTORIA!!!!!!! *cries some more* But she said that Shelby has been setting him up to it and told Trevor that Victoria liked him which isnt true. Victoria hasnt responded but at the sleep over lock In I went to i told people who i liked.... Victoria said she was going to say no!! (yes!!) She felt a little unconfertable with the conversation also so yeah. Tails I'll tell you the story in more detail at skool. |
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Post by Bloodbone on Apr 1, 2008 8:09:47 GMT -5
where did all of that come from?
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Apr 2, 2008 19:27:59 GMT -5
Frosty spilled but shes ok now. Victoria said no  And well Trevor still stares at me. Also I like your poem a lot Blood, its very well I can picture it, its very creative ! |
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Post by Bloodbone on Apr 3, 2008 8:14:47 GMT -5
well thank you and i hope that everything between you and tevor works out! ;D
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Apr 3, 2008 15:48:50 GMT -5
Me too!!!!!! *jumps around stupidly* I'm probobly gonna ask him out next week. . .
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Post by Runningtail on Apr 3, 2008 19:02:27 GMT -5
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Post by Bloodbone on Apr 4, 2008 16:58:38 GMT -5
*Blood stands there and watches confusedly...then jumps up and screams horay and then falls to break a leg...lol jk*
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Post by Runningtail on Apr 4, 2008 17:43:15 GMT -5
*rushes over to help Blood up and sees she's okay then does some more happy dancing*
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Apr 5, 2008 9:52:35 GMT -5
O.O lolz
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Post by Bloodbone on Apr 7, 2008 14:52:28 GMT -5
*Blood then starts to laugh hysterically and cant stop she starts choking ...lol idk...shut up if ur laughing! lol
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Apr 7, 2008 19:16:47 GMT -5
xDDDDDDDDDD No comment lol I cant think of what to type!! xDDDD
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Post by F*R*O*S*T*Y on Sept 22, 2008 16:54:53 GMT -5
I miss those days with Blood, I'm keeping this thread, and locking for memories, of what this site used to be like. Now its dead, its like scary almost how this used to be my favorite site.
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Here I'll type that!
And well Trevor still stares at me. Also I like your poem a lot Blood, its very well I can picture it, its very creative 
